A+Mountain+Journey

Where is your Literary Devises Assignment? Complete and upload ASAP so I can evaluate.

Dave Conroy was a stupid man. The narrator revealed that early in the story-"...a man was a fool to travel alone in the mountains...". Which is exactly what Dave Conroy was trying to do. Dave's second most important trait was his greed. If it was n't for the fact that he was greedy, he would n't have been out in the mountains in the first place. His third most important trait was his naïveté-first off his sureness that the cabin would be there, second, that he could afford to stop on his way to Macmoran's cabin because -"...They would come and get him..." Although his greed and naïveté are both very important, what takes the cake (too informal) is his stubbornness. He decided NOT to wait till March like he should have, he decided NOT to stop under the "fine spruce tree" he saw, and most importantly, he decided NOT to stop after he froze his hands. So, in conclusion, Dave Conroy was a very foolish man, who's own determination to brave the cold caused him to succumb to it's icy grasp.

Alex and I both agree that I should get a 5, because "there were some basic errors, but you showed a clear understanding of the assignment". You need to start with a well thought out topic sentence. Introduce your paragraph and "hook" the reader. Nice conclusion. 4.5/6